tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1063569472393979820.post4053349883806681173..comments2023-04-10T06:39:50.433-07:00Comments on Kitty: trying to writeKitty http://www.blogger.com/profile/14304457975434547107noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1063569472393979820.post-7757040265903634292009-09-14T13:59:07.817-07:002009-09-14T13:59:07.817-07:00This is quite well written yet again, there's ...This is quite well written yet again, there's some very nice imagery here that help to carry across your emotions.<br />For example the images of the river rocks and the corpse stand out alot and grab the reader.<br />I noticed one or two spelling mistakes and perhaps one too many commas but aside from that it's extremely well written, keep it upAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com